I've gotten great feedback on my re-write. Yes it's from my father, but I'll take what I can get. Once I do the final edit I'll let some family members read it. I know they aren't the best for constructive feedback, but I'm still unsure of my writing so I'm taking it slow.
Anyone interested in writing should check out Nathan Bransford's @ blog http://blog.nathanbransford.com/ it's insperational and informative.
In the creative, fun, musing part of book two!
AJ Richardson, Writer - check out my blog @ http://ajrichardson.blogspot.com/